Nicely done
It's a hell of a lot better than I could do, so well done :D
I like the diversity - choir, the electric guitar that sneaks in during the middle kind playing along with the main tune (which really reminds me of Tatu for some reason - remember the Russian girl duo who pretended they were lesbians?).
I like the rhythm and the bit at the end that sounds like the start of a trance song.
I'm not that great at vocalising what's going on in my head, but it's an interesting song, so well done. It's looped about 6 times since I've been writing it and I'm not pissed off with it yet, so that deserves respect :D